Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. One day I was in Mexico taking my two weeks vacations from my work when I was in the 1st week in Mexico August 22,1998 I receive a phone call in the morning at 6:17am from my boss in the United States saying to go back to the United States to investigate a dead women named Rosa Rodriguez. I took the fly the next day that was August 23,1998 at 4:35am and got to the United States the same day at 8:55am about to be 9:00am. When I got there my boss named Matthew Lopez told me that i was going to be on this case and i was going to be the main one to investigate what happen. So i started investigating what was going on and i found out that Rosa Rodriguez always haded problems with her husband Ramon Rodriguez. so i investigated where Rosa lived. Rosa lived in a very quiet,calm,and rich neighborhood named Evans ton. Well when i went there i started talking to there neighbor's how was the relationship with Rosa and Ramon Rodriguez the people started telling me that they always haded problems they don't know why but they always needed to have problems there was no day that Rosa and Ramon didn't have any problems. So the neighboors told me that 2 or 3 days ago that was August 21,1998 an early morning around 6:00am the neighbors heard screams and yelling after 5 minutes pass the neighbors saw Ramon Rodriguez leaving the house with all his stuff and they also saw Ramon bloody from his hands. The neighbors called the police and when the police open the door they saw Rosa Rodriguez hanging Rosa was dead already and the neighbors were the only witness and saw that the husband left bloody so it gots a chance that was the husband Ramon Rodriguez. so there was no resolution because they don't know how Ramon looks or where did he went. Also they don't know why did Ramon Rodriguez killed Rosa Rodriguez. Ramon Rodriguez left a sign hanging next to Rosa saying yall next...... THE END ...... TO BE CONTINUED......

2 comments:

  1. its good but you should make it more mysterious and why would he kill the neighboors???

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  2. You and David have almost the same story.

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